Trailer draft 1

The feedback for my trailer from the target audience was primarily issues with the inter-titles. I have not yet included the production and distribution logos in my trailer which is what I need to do moving forward, as well as the fact that I need to include inter-titles alongside the footage to connect the story. As well as the fact that it was suggested that I could include a voice over of the main character telling her story to the audience as it fits into my genre of film very well. Moreover, I also need to collect more extra footage as the ending of my trailer has not yet been included. Therefore, currently the sound does not match up with the trailer due to the fact that there is no ending and there is a lack of footage on other locations. I hope that once I complete all of these improvements, the trailer will be of better quality and more coherent within the story line.